Reviews - Unsterblich

Awesome stuff. I really love the non-linear portion. The only issue I have with that is the optional paths need to be a lot longer. Not only will this enhance the feeling of choosing your own path, but it allows the user to play the mod several times over and be happy to do so.

The multiple endings really added to it, as well.

I'm really happy to see someone show this kind of creativity in these mods. If you ever plan to make another map, please abuse the crap out of the alternative paths, to the point where it feels like you can play the custom story over and over again without repetition.

Excellent work.

It's a nice game, decent story and the monsters oh how they scary the living hell out of me. Good job

The story was okay, to say it optimistically. I understand this was your first story, but it definitely could've been better. For one, you gave Sanity Potions. This is fine, but it tells the player "There are jumpscares in this story. Take these." and there was certainly jumpscares.

The door was bugged and wouldn't open with hammer or key, as people have said. I literally had to go into the level editor and unlock the door manually. And with the extinguishing torches, it was easy to expect the Alexander scare.

Overall, you could've done better. It seemed okay at first, but quickly went downhill. Obliviator, you get a four out of ten.

In spite of being your first custom story, it was pretty nice.
Mechanisms you used were good and interesting (but sometimes it was hard to find out what to do or where to go and even harder if your lantern was totally empty - large rooms whithout posibility to use your tinderboxes). I´ve also found some logical inconsistencies.
The atmosphere wasn´t bad at all, but i think that it could be even more scary.
However, the scripting was nice and the storyline was gripping and suprising.

Story 9/10
Gameplay 7/10
Atmosphere 7/10

Total: 8/10

Good, but neither the hammer NOR the key work in the room after you blow a hole in the wooden wall (after you crawl through the "narrow passage"). I would have rated it better if that situation would work correctly.

Nice map. I like the start. Jump of the window.
Items are not to many but not to little.
10/10 :D

The door you have to hammer open after the key breaks is bugged for me. I couldn't open it no matter what I did.

"This is my first story"????+ Cant be!! :D

pretty good story and a perfect length custom story. not too long and not terribly short. the effort that goes into developing a multi-path and multiple ending custom story is definitely worth some credit as well.

the only thing that bothered me was the size of the maps- for example the underground dungeon area. i started to feel like some of the areas were frustratingly huge, like the chapel and the water area where you grab the key. if some rooms and corridors were scaled down by half i think it would be much more enjoyable. just a personal preference.

good mod. worth the time.

Liked it alot! Original ideas and nice scenery! I really like the village. The Underground was a bit confusing, but I managed it somehow! Oh, almost forgot. Great Storytelling!!