"We're getting out of this prison." Alone is about atmosphere, sort of.
Okay I wanna give you feedback too because you gave your feedback in my ATSL story. :)
So... It was really short, but creepy. Atmosphere was really terrifying and mapping was top-notch! Only think that really bugs me only walking sewers.. and erh.. only pretty easy puzzle.. this is only my opinion, but I want something map changing and maybe more puzzles in future and scariness to get atmosphere back.. in your next stories and little improves something really unique.
I really liked it! It has potential! Nice work triad!